Wednesday, April 20, 2011

Local business site

End of class

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Sustainable site


I mede over time they will decrease the width, but "if else" is not working.

3 comments:

  1. Hey Chiao!

    So for the Hollywood Feed site I love the paw prints breaking the content area and the cat and dog at top right. It makes it fun. The green you chose in the background is also very nice as it doesn't get too neon or lime and start to mess things up.

    It is weird having the texture not cover the whole content area and at this point it feels a little too bold to me. I would tone down the texture some and let that background come through more.

    I'm on the fence about the font for the logo. I think it works for me and adds to this playful, "Hey, pets are fun!" feel but sometimes I wonder if it is too close to Comic Sans. I don't know, I might be getting too picky, but I hope I've helped!

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  2. I agree with Michael about pretty much everything. If you're going to do snapshots, I'm thinking you should do more than 1, maybe 3? I prefer the photographic content over the vector graphics. I'd also play with more ways to set the type in the logo. Maybe move "Feed" more to the left? Or maybe have "Hollywood" and "Feed" on one line? Personally, I kind of like the logo that Hollywood Feed already has, if you want to just use that one and redo your colors to match the original branding.

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  3. I agree with what Michael said about the texture. Maybe it should go into the outer area or the menu are instead of the main text area. Also, perhaps you could try integrating the "Hollywood Feed" in with the paw prints. Right now they feel a little disjointed.

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